By Ashlee Zlotnick

The most gruesome thing put on earth

From L.A down to Perth.

We don’t know what they feel deep inside.

The feeling they had when they hide.

To see the stains on the floor and the draw.

Murder is not right.

Why do people have the need

to fight.

Hashem always has to pick.

That guy got the short end of the stick.

After you murder you go to jail.

But you get a glance of your victim, so pail.

You see the family, you can no longer hide,

that feeling you got when you pulled the trigger.

He was an inosent mine digger!

The question still remains why?

You no longer have the chance to lie.

So go up in that court room,

and tell them why you made that big BOOM



  1. wordwand Said:

    a lovely poem and an interesting theme.

    • poetsandall Said:

      Thank you so much. If you wouldn’t mind I would love to hear what you say about the rest of the things I have written.

  2. Amir Said:

    strong and deep

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