Relationship Oath

By:Ashlee Zlotnick

 

The sun is upon my face

as I awaken with a smile.

You have a certain form of grace.

I can see your reflection on the tile.

.

My heart begins to race

as you come closer towards me.

I open up my mental case

to figure out exactly what are we.

.

It is beating like a bass

as our lips begin to touch.

I feel your heart beating at an irregular pace.

This feeling is becoming too much.

.

We are tied together with a single lace

as a volcano erupts inside us both.

In a deck of cards, you are my ace

because we have finally taken the relationship oath.

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