Ever Lasting Tide

By:Ashlee Zlotnick

The music starts to play.

My body begins to sway.

I place my hand in yours

and bang goes all my flaws.


Your arm goes around my back.

A nervous feeling I lack.

You come into my personal world

and I go into yours perfectly, like an oyster and a pearl.


Your body moves mine,

around the room just fine.

In the corner I strike a pose.

A spectator over there better not dose.


We are in the spot light

as our dance begins to take flight.

I feel as if the world has come to a halt.

Nothing can stop us, not even a lighting bolt.


There is nothing better than this feeling.

It is something everyone can believe in.

It’s called confidence, joy and pride.

Your emotions when dancing, can create an every lasting tide.



  1. Jingle Said:

    the image is powerful,

    keep dancing, smiles.

    Happy Rally.

  2. This is so beautiful and romantic, it has a wonderful flow too like a dance =)

  3. Aw to dance again. You brought back the memories of a “sport” I truly enjoyed with the right partner.

  4. alexvonfox Said:

    I enjoyed this vvery much – keep up the great work

  5. Andy Said:

    Great imagery in this poem.

    Keep on dancing 🙂

    Nicely done!

  6. Poets Rally Said:

    this is cool,
    sharp imagery….

    join poets rally if you can, loved your participation.

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