By:Ashlee Zlotnick
The music starts to play.
My body begins to sway.
I place my hand in yours
and bang goes all my flaws.
.
Your arm goes around my back.
A nervous feeling I lack.
You come into my personal world
and I go into yours perfectly, like an oyster and a pearl.
.
Your body moves mine,
around the room just fine.
In the corner I strike a pose.
A spectator over there better not dose.
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We are in the spot light
as our dance begins to take flight.
I feel as if the world has come to a halt.
Nothing can stop us, not even a lighting bolt.
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There is nothing better than this feeling.
It is something everyone can believe in.
It’s called confidence, joy and pride.
Your emotions when dancing, can create an every lasting tide.
Jingle Said:
on July 2, 2011 at 11:34 pm
the image is powerful,
keep dancing, smiles.
Happy Rally.
mindlovemisery Said:
on July 3, 2011 at 7:00 am
This is so beautiful and romantic, it has a wonderful flow too like a dance =)
Jacqui Binford-Bell Said:
on July 3, 2011 at 10:53 am
Aw to dance again. You brought back the memories of a “sport” I truly enjoyed with the right partner.
alexvonfox Said:
on July 3, 2011 at 4:43 pm
I enjoyed this vvery much – keep up the great work
Andy Said:
on July 8, 2011 at 9:48 pm
Great imagery in this poem.
Keep on dancing 🙂
Nicely done!
poetsandall Said:
on July 9, 2011 at 8:50 am
I promise you no matter what, as long as I can dance I will
Poets Rally Said:
on September 24, 2011 at 1:49 am
this is cool,
sharp imagery….
join poets rally if you can, loved your participation.